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Jun 30, 2009 02:45 |  #1

i shot this one yesterday but i feel something is lacking,whats that?

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Jun 30, 2009 02:47 |  #2

honeslty... nothing intersting.. it makes me disoriented... you dont need the border... the huge oof leaves dont help the image.. it also looks a tad oversharpened but that could be because of the jpeg compression..


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Jun 30, 2009 02:58 as a reply to  @ canonnoob's post |  #3

thank you canonnoob this what i felt and expected this critique




  
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Jun 30, 2009 03:05 |  #4

It's not clear what it tries to portray. The larger leaves to the right are not in focus which distracts and its hard to pick out something to look at. Whilst you hunt for that something, you are disorientated as said above, as it looks almost like a road above the leaves which immediately tells my brain it's upside down.




  
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Jun 30, 2009 05:03 as a reply to  @ clicktor's post |  #5

I thought the same thing, it looks upside down to me.




  
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Jun 30, 2009 12:57 |  #6

yes, looks upside down. maybe i ask what it is?


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Jun 30, 2009 13:09 |  #7

it looks like boston ivy.. or grapevines. i would like to see the pic turned upsidedown :)




  
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Jun 30, 2009 13:41 as a reply to  @ shannyD's post |  #8

Upside down is not helping this shot at all.


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