Kim & Jeff E-Session

Here are a few shots from last weekend

C&C welcome

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1 looks too yellow
Love 3 and 4 !

Thanks!

Yea i did a split tone on 1 tried something different

This is my first e shoot so any c&c please!

In 3 it would have been nice to capture the ring

You know when i started processing these i was kicking myself i did not get a ring shot!

I don't think i will forget that now

Disclaimer: I'm no pro, or even close, but here's some C&C:

I think that the composition is nice in all four of them.

That said, here are some comments:

1. The color seems off (though you say you were going for that look--why?). Also, it appears that she was squinting--do you have another shot of this pose where she wasn't?

2. They look underexposed. Did you use fill flash? If so, a little more would have helped (or brighten their faces in post).

3. I disagree with the poster above, I don't know why you'd show off the ring in this shot (I'd do a different pose for the ring shot). I'd actually ask her to lower her hands like he did.

4. I really like this idea. However, the strong sunlight in the upper right detracts from this shot. Maybe a different angle would have helped. I'm not sure how this would look, but I might also try this shot with more shallow depth of field, so that only he or she would be in focus--right now you've got the background in focus as well. The color seems a bit off on this one as well.

They're really nice, though. It seems that you've got ideas and an eye for composition.

I didn't mean for that to be the ring shot. looking at her hand position i fell it would have been better if it were the ring hand.
Looking at the rest on flickr it looks like you guys had fun !

i would just suggest capturing more moments to show their love and passion... but overall great job! keep shooting!

Closer crop on #1 and maybe blur the background a bit

Thanks for the comments, its amazing how much you learn just from doing 1 shoot. I can't wait to do a 2nd.

Here are two more that show a little more intimacy....they were a fun couple to shoot

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