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Jul 15, 2009 07:42 |  #1

1) (I'm gonna have to go back and clone out that basketball net... lol... missed it last time)

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Jul 15, 2009 09:08 |  #2

I love the pose in the first one, but it seems a little too hot on the left side and the background competes with her a little too much. The second shot would be perfect if she filled a bit more of the frame. She is just too small there.




  
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Jul 15, 2009 09:34 |  #3

Nice things about both these shots, but I think you've missed the exposure. In both shots, her dress is very hot, and appears to have lost all detail. Shame... Compositionally, I really like the second shot, but as gonzogolf suggests would crop it a little tighter to make her more of the focus. Thanks for sharing.


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Jul 17, 2009 11:44 |  #4

Both are good ones :)

However in the 1st, her face is sort of lost.
In the 2nd, the model could have filled more of the frame.


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Jul 17, 2009 11:49 |  #5

Star Barn MM shoot?


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Jul 17, 2009 12:07 |  #6

markblanchard13 wrote in post #8296798 (external link)
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Jul 17, 2009 12:11 |  #7

Tommy wrote in post #8296912 (external link)
yep...

I wish I could have gone. Maybe the next one...


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Jul 17, 2009 14:22 |  #8

I really like the 2nd shot.


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