Matt Photog Peters wrote in post #8312837
=Matt 'Photog' Peters;8312837]About me page, I'm not saying everyone here knows my life story, but would you be inclined to contact me?
I like it, but its slightely too casual for my taste- it doesn't exude the correct amount of proficiency or professionalism. I think it is very much selling you short.
In all "about" sections, i personally never like the " i found my calling to the camera X-number of years ago and have been going ever since" type comments. It gives the impression that this is a hobby that sits secondary to your life.
You want it to seem that you live, eat and breathe for the perfect picture.
I don't have any examples for this one (not feeling very creative this evening), but i would make its less friendly and more assertive.
State your name and a bit of background. Dont put things like "i guess by now", it sounds like you are nervous.
Generalising a bit (a lot :lol
people think of photographers in stereotypes that revolve around the "brilliant creative" - someone who is a bit arrogant, beleives in his ability above all else and will do what he wants to bring his vision to life. Either that or the stereotype of the perv, which we definitely want to steer clear of lol!
Now im not saying that you have to sound like an arsehole, but you should sound assertive so that you at least hit on a bit of the stereotype so that they will subconciously think you know what you are doing.
EDIT: just read though this again - i don't mean to sound so attacking Matt! I just wrote this as the thoughts came from my head, obviously without engaging the part of my brain which controls being nice!