Approve the Cookies
This website uses cookies to improve your user experience. By using this site, you agree to our use of cookies and our Privacy Policy.
OK
Forums  •   • New posts  •   • RTAT  •   • 'Best of'  •   • Gallery  •   • Gear
Guest
Forums  •   • New posts  •   • RTAT  •   • 'Best of'  •   • Gallery  •   • Gear
Register to forums    Log in

 
FORUMS Photo Sharing & Discussion Critique Corner 
Thread started 18 Aug 2009 (Tuesday) 19:14
Search threadPrev/next
sponsored links (only for non-logged)

Some Help Please

 
melindac
Member
31 posts
Joined Aug 2008
     
Aug 18, 2009 19:14 |  #1

Hi,

What do you think of the before and after picture. Does the PP and HDR do anything for you? Also, I can still see a faint line where the power line used to be. Any suggestions on how to get rid of that?

Thanks in advance!

IMAGE: http://lh3.ggpht.com/_z5C-Yc-BZ5Y/SotClQHiCrI/AAAAAAAAAX0/ph1qCxd1Gig/s800/IMG_4182.JPG
IMAGE LINK: http://picasaweb.googl​e.com …1BvhXuA?feat=em​bedwebsite  (external link)

IMAGE: http://lh6.ggpht.com/_z5C-Yc-BZ5Y/SotC6Bm2gwI/AAAAAAAAAX4/OJHLNMZAcAY/s800/church_a.jpg
IMAGE LINK: http://picasaweb.googl​e.com …n9ZMnRw?feat=em​bedwebsite  (external link)



  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
dawnkyung
Senior Member
951 posts
Likes: 45
Joined Aug 2009
     
Aug 18, 2009 19:55 |  #2

My first thought when looking at the "After" picture was WHOA!

I like the building a lot, but the streetlights kinda throw me off.

Did you clone out the wire? Try to heal brush it some? Maybe take a brush with the same color of the area with a soft edge on multiply and go over the edge some?


dawn | 29 | gear

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
gcflora
"I'm not normal"
Avatar
1,544 posts
Likes: 7
Joined May 2009
Location: Australia
     
Aug 18, 2009 20:50 |  #3

I'm not sure. I think that if the first one was lightened a bit and the wire cloned out that I'd like it (the first one) better. By the way, the cloning out of the wire in the second photo is a bit... obvious :)

Cheers,


Craig
http://www.australimag​e.com.au (external link)

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
Robert_Lay
Cream of the Crop
Avatar
7,546 posts
Joined Jul 2005
Location: Spotsylvania Co., VA
     
Aug 18, 2009 21:07 |  #4

I think you did a great job. While you were at it, it would have helped to straighten out the horizon and correct the converging verticals.

For future reference, I suggest taking such a shot a little later in the evening. The balance between the artificial lights and the twilight is critical.

The composition might be just a bit better with more foreground and less sky - plus it would have reduced the converging verticals to get the camera closer to level.


Bob
Quality of Light (external link), Photo Tool ver 2.0 (external link)
Canon Rebel XTi; EF-S 10-22mm f/3.5-f/5.6 USM; EF-S 18-55 mm f/3.5-f/5.6; EF 28-135mm f/3.5-5.6 IS USM; EF 50mm f/1.4 USM; Canon Powershot G5; Canon AE1(2); Leica R4s; Battery Grip BG-E3; Pentax Digital Spotmeter with Zone VI Mod & Calibration.

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
rw2
Goldmember
Avatar
4,201 posts
Likes: 3
Joined Jun 2006
Location: North Dakota
     
Aug 18, 2009 21:55 |  #5

Just for fun. Pushed the limits. You can also use the blurr tool to help with the remaining line left by the wire.


HOSTED PHOTO
please log in to view hosted photos in full size.


If you're afraid of failure ... you'll never succeed!
Rob

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
melindac
THREAD ­ STARTER
Member
31 posts
Joined Aug 2008
     
Aug 18, 2009 22:14 as a reply to  @ Robert_Lay's post |  #6

Thank you all for your comments and suggestions.

dawnkyung - I will try your suggestion with the PP.

gcflora - I agree, the line is definitely obvious.

Bob - Luckily the church is nearby so I'll try out your suggestions. What tool in photoshop do you recommend to fix the converging verticals? Transform?

rw2 - I like your edit. It looks cool and I definitely don't see the line there anymore.




  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
kylejackson
Member
211 posts
Joined Oct 2008
Location: Columbia, SC
     
Aug 18, 2009 23:06 |  #7

i like the first one, don't like the hdr at all




  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
kjonnnn
Goldmember
1,216 posts
Likes: 148
Joined Apr 2005
Location: Chicago, Illinois
     
Aug 19, 2009 01:48 |  #8

Hmmm. Just a personal choice when it comes to HDR ... I prefer a photography to look like a photography and art to look art ... Even the most extreme HDR "can" look beautiful, but he can easily be used as a crutch for just bad photography.

Anyway. With this photo, other than HDR, I think the key to post processing is in using various selection tools to edit parts of it separately. I selected the ground and sky separately and adjusted levels and saturation separately. Also used a slight surface blur on the church, and a bit of sponge saturation on just the lights. I used the clone and patch tools to get rid of the electrical wires. If you gonna get rid of the wires, you might as well get rid of the traffic lights too.
The top of the trees could be done better, but hey, I'm sleepy. LOL

IMAGE NOT FOUND
HTTP response: 404 | MIME changed to 'image/gif' | Byte size: ZERO | PHOTOBUCKET ERROR IMAGE



  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
Robert_Lay
Cream of the Crop
Avatar
7,546 posts
Joined Jul 2005
Location: Spotsylvania Co., VA
     
Aug 19, 2009 23:05 |  #9

melindac wrote in post #8484065 (external link)
Thank you all for your comments and suggestions.

dawnkyung - I will try your suggestion with the PP.

gcflora - I agree, the line is definitely obvious.

Bob - Luckily the church is nearby so I'll try out your suggestions. What tool in photoshop do you recommend to fix the converging verticals? Transform?

rw2 - I like your edit. It looks cool and I definitely don't see the line there anymore.

I believe it is called "Transform Perspective", and you use the Crop tool and check the "Perspective" option.


Bob
Quality of Light (external link), Photo Tool ver 2.0 (external link)
Canon Rebel XTi; EF-S 10-22mm f/3.5-f/5.6 USM; EF-S 18-55 mm f/3.5-f/5.6; EF 28-135mm f/3.5-5.6 IS USM; EF 50mm f/1.4 USM; Canon Powershot G5; Canon AE1(2); Leica R4s; Battery Grip BG-E3; Pentax Digital Spotmeter with Zone VI Mod & Calibration.

  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
melindac
THREAD ­ STARTER
Member
31 posts
Joined Aug 2008
     
Aug 21, 2009 22:06 |  #10

kjonnn - nice PP. i like how you removed the traffic lights. i was too tired to remove it after cloning out the lines. maybe i'm doing it wrong. do you use a big or small brush.




  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
kjonnnn
Goldmember
1,216 posts
Likes: 148
Joined Apr 2005
Location: Chicago, Illinois
     
Aug 21, 2009 22:17 as a reply to  @ melindac's post |  #11

Thanks. The size brush I used was a little bit smaller than the with of the light pole.




  
  LOG IN TO REPLY
sponsored links (only for non-logged)

1,588 views & 0 likes for this thread, 7 members have posted to it.
Some Help Please
FORUMS Photo Sharing & Discussion Critique Corner 
AAA
x 1600
y 1600

Jump to forum...   •  Rules   •  Forums   •  New posts   •  RTAT   •  'Best of'   •  Gallery   •  Gear   •  Reviews   •  Member list   •  Polls   •  Image rules   •  Search   •  Password reset   •  Home

Not a member yet?
Register to forums
Registered members may log in to forums and access all the features: full search, image upload, follow forums, own gear list and ratings, likes, more forums, private messaging, thread follow, notifications, own gallery, all settings, view hosted photos, own reviews, see more and do more... and all is free. Don't be a stranger - register now and start posting!


COOKIES DISCLAIMER: This website uses cookies to improve your user experience. By using this site, you agree to our use of cookies and to our privacy policy.
Privacy policy and cookie usage info.


POWERED BY AMASS forum software 2.58forum software
version 2.58 /
code and design
by Pekka Saarinen ©
for photography-on-the.net

Latest registered member was a spammer, and banned as such!
2693 guests, 136 members online
Simultaneous users record so far is 15,144, that happened on Nov 22, 2018

Photography-on-the.net Digital Photography Forums is the website for photographers and all who love great photos, camera and post processing techniques, gear talk, discussion and sharing. Professionals, hobbyists, newbies and those who don't even own a camera -- all are welcome regardless of skill, favourite brand, gear, gender or age. Registering and usage is free.