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Aug 22, 2009 00:56 |  #1

I posted some pics couple of days ago and tried to see if i could do better.c/c please?

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Aug 22, 2009 02:36 |  #2

Looks to me that you are learning your camera nicely. Your practice is good ... you just need to start shooting better subjects. For me, 4 of 6 of these come across as "what can I take a picture of around the house" and post.

Don't get me wrong. There's nothing wrong with experimenting that at all. I did exactly that when I first got my DSLR. It's part of learning. I just feel once the honeymoon is over, you will need to start developing the "eye" for topics that interest you the most. I also think you'll get more feedback here once you have a more solid focal point.

In any case, keep it up and hope to see what you come up with very soon!

P.S. I like your creativity on the signature placement in each shot. ;)


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Aug 22, 2009 11:15 |  #3

You posted too many unrelated pictures to get many detailed critiques. Many people move on without comment.


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Aug 24, 2009 10:26 |  #4

Properly exposed, sharply focused photos of absolutely nothing interesting. You've gotten the technique down, now apply it to something exciting or interesting.




  
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Aug 24, 2009 15:03 |  #5

I rather like the faucet shot. Looks like you Photoshop'd the background in the first one. Work on composition, and keep shootin !!


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Aug 24, 2009 20:54 |  #6

first was straight of the camera except for the contrast and stuff little stuff. the blurr came out of the camera


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