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Aug 27, 2009 02:12 |  #1

my niece she is actually only in 8th grade, thought i needed to practice so CC is welcome

no flash, my batts died before i started so i made do with what got

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Aug 27, 2009 07:33 |  #2

Next time tell her to put her phone in her pocket. :)

In the first one, your focus seems to be her shorts and her face is a bit soft. Also, her left fingertips are missing, but I like the pose. She may have moved her head in this one.

In a couple she has trees growing out of her head. A step or two to one side would have moved those over and made them less distracting. #4 is a great shot, except for the column.

In all of them I think you did a great job using what you had available!


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Aug 27, 2009 07:34 |  #3

Good job! It appears you have the posing / style down. The light illuminating the palm tree/yellow rail keeps getting my attention but I'm sure that would have been much less obvious if you would have been able to use your flash.


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Aug 27, 2009 09:04 |  #4

i wish i had the flash working, such a nooB mistake :(

after the fact i did notice the trees and the people, i thought the thin DOF woulda made them irrelevant, i guess i was wrong :(

keep the feedbacks coming!

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Aug 31, 2009 03:07 |  #5

kandyredcoi wrote in post #8530752 (external link)
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Very cute and sweet this shoot of your beautiful niece. ;)

1: pose and you point of shooting i think is not good

I think if you has interested to enhance the beautiful legs or your niece is better body and legs are not on the same plane as you see easily on the second and third shoot there is a lack of harmony the body is curve and with lack of light while only her legs are evident.

4: nice despite the shadow a little to harsh, there is a little too much background and her feet are blur. :confused:




  
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Sep 01, 2009 03:29 |  #6

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