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Sep 02, 2009 13:16 |  #1

This may, or may not belong in the G&N section but I can not post there yet. This is my second attempt at doing a "model" shoot. Any C&C would be greatly appreciated!

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Sep 02, 2009 13:22 |  #2

#3 is my favorite.


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Sep 02, 2009 13:24 |  #3

The first one is over exposed - you should have notched down the flash a bit.
The second is a bit underexposed with some nasty bad dark areas that don't work.
The third is ok - but here legs are cut off....does not look right.
The forth her arm is focus but the key factor are her eyes which are out of focus -- plus she is going for sexy eyes and you caught here with sleepy eyes-- the angle is too harsh - the location is not great.
The fifth and sixth are not great in my opinion - there is sexy looking through the vines and there is leaves in the wrong place look-- guess which one I think this is.


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Sep 02, 2009 13:31 |  #4

stathunter wrote in post #8570449 (external link)
The first one is over exposed - you should have notched down the flash a bit.
The second is a bit underexposed with some nasty bad dark areas that don't work.
The third is ok - but here legs are cut off....does not look right.
The forth her arm is focus but the key factor are her eyes which are out of focus -- plus she is going for sexy eyes and you caught here with sleepy eyes-- the angle is too harsh - the location is not great.
The fifth and sixth are not great in my opinion - there is sexy looking through the vines and there is leaves in the wrong place look-- guess which one I think this is.

i agree with everything. her "sexy" face isn't working at all. i also don't like that she's making almost the exact same face in every pose. have her smile every once in awhile :D


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Sep 02, 2009 13:31 |  #5

Got some work to do. Thanks for the input.

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Sep 02, 2009 13:32 |  #6

great model posing for just a second attempt!

I find the moon (?) in 2 is kinda distracting


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Sep 02, 2009 14:17 |  #7

billybookcase wrote in post #8570497 (external link)
great model posing for just a second attempt!

I find the moon (?) in 2 is kinda distracting

Moon is correct. Thank you.


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Sep 02, 2009 14:30 |  #8

stathunter wrote in post #8570449 (external link)
The first one is over exposed - you should have notched down the flash a bit.
The second is a bit underexposed with some nasty bad dark areas that don't work.
The third is ok - but here legs are cut off....does not look right.
The forth her arm is focus but the key factor are her eyes which are out of focus -- plus she is going for sexy eyes and you caught here with sleepy eyes-- the angle is too harsh - the location is not great.
The fifth and sixth are not great in my opinion - there is sexy looking through the vines and there is leaves in the wrong place look-- guess which one I think this is.

I agree with all of this. Still pretty good for second time! Keep it up:) She is very pretty!


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Sep 02, 2009 17:24 |  #9

3 for me


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Sep 02, 2009 22:17 |  #10

I agree with what is said about the lighting. I would just work with the model on expressions - they all look like her eyes are half-closed, which gives off a "I'm on drugs" look sometimes, so you want to avoid that. Also, say no to just one weed over the face. Either put her in the plant or not at all. It's distracting and oddly placed and for her having such amazing eyes, it's just something to compete with.


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