"Model" on location, first attempt, building a port

Alright, shot these last night with available light only. Got my gf to do the job after twisting her arm.. I like how some of them came out but, tear me to shreds I want to get better, and advise me if any of these or the ones on my flickr are acceptable for building a port

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Some really nice shots on show here, looks like your portfolio is off to a good start.

good shots

Nice series... I like 4, 5, 7, and 8... These poses flatter your model's figure making her appear slimmer and yet still feature her beautiful features and great smile. The other shots tend to have her square on to the camera, and she appears heavier. Thanks for sharing

they look god, light was good but one thing is that at least the first 3 are oof. The best ones to my eyes are 4 and 6. now comes the fun part, playing with light. Make sure you hit focus because even with great light that can deteriorate a pic a lot.

Thanks a lot, I had others that I did not share that were definitely OOF but I thought these caught focus, I think if anything these could suffer from some camera shake. I caught the golden light but even at f/1.8 it was difficult sometimes to hit the right shutter speed.

I definitely need to pick up a shorter prime.. I really didn't like having to be limited by the 85.