First Self Portrait

Hi, first time posting in people section.

I was bored and decided to snap a self portrait since i've never done one.

the flash was sitting on cam left pointing at a reflector i made on cam right.

Part of your face and skirt are burned.
Your hands are cuts.
Pose: ok.

Now the shadow that cover part of your face is still too present.

alessandro2009 wrote in post #8716710
Part of your face and skirt are burned.
Your hands are cuts.
Pose: ok.

Now the shadow that cover part of your face is still too present.

yeah, burn that skirt!

turn down the flash a little.

alessandro2009 wrote in post #8716710
Part of your face and skirt are burned.
Your hands are cuts.
Pose: ok.

Now the shadow that cover part of your face is still too present.

im sorry, "skirt"? how could i fix these problems?