Here's a portrait of my old girl I shot with my Tamron 17-50mm. I'd be grateful for any CC or suggestions on this. I think maybe it's too centered, but I'm not real sure on that. Feel free to edit, crop and post improvements.
gibbit1 Goldmember 1,658 posts Likes: 7 Joined Jul 2009 Location: Valdese, nc More info | Oct 05, 2009 18:53 | #1 Here's a portrait of my old girl I shot with my Tamron 17-50mm. I'd be grateful for any CC or suggestions on this. I think maybe it's too centered, but I'm not real sure on that. Feel free to edit, crop and post improvements. "Everything will be alright. I'm from the government and I'm here to help."
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usukshooter Senior Member 337 posts Joined Dec 2005 Location: Manchester, UK More info | Oct 06, 2009 05:12 | #2 I would have removed the toy, if possible and then maybe included her front leg instead of cropping it off. Otherwise, I really like it - good lighting and perspective, great look on her face. Sometimes, centered is okay, I wouldn't worry about it.
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vpnd Goldmember 1,483 posts Joined Oct 2007 Location: nd More info | Oct 06, 2009 08:58 | #3 I'm not a fan of the lighting. The perspective is in between "in your face and dynamic" and a "normal" view of a regular portrait. I don't mean to be too harsh, this one jus doesn't do too much for me. Canon "Snappy".... Thanks Mom and Dad!
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Flo Gimmie Some Lovin 44,987 posts Likes: 16 Joined Jul 2007 Location: Nanaimo,B.C. More info | I tried a crop and a flip, lightend the eyes and sharp...Handsome dog,
you're a great friend, but if Zombies chase us, I am tripping you.
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blkdogak Member 189 posts Joined Jul 2009 Location: Palmer, Alaska More info | Nice shot!!! Beautiful girl. For me more dog person than photographer I would have cropped to mostly head with a little of the shoulders showing.
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rox1e6 Senior Member 288 posts Likes: 3 Joined Feb 2009 Location: The Fens...UK More info | She's a lovely looking shepherd, my 1st ever job was in a GSD kennels so I've a soft spot for them. Like Flo I flipped the image, did a quick clone job on the background and just gave it a Highpass filter, it may be a little too sharp actually!..but you see what can be done with 2mins editing. De
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Oct 06, 2009 22:25 | #7 Flo wrote in post #8770991 I tried a crop and a flip, lightend the eyes and sharp...Handsome dog, It is a bit soft still..get that focus on the eyes and the rest follow.It must be the compression, because my TIFF version at full size shows the eyes are sharp. I can even see the sky reflected sharply in them. I appreciate everyone's comments. She is a pretty dog, isn't she. Her fur is luxuriously soft. She's 11 years old now, but still very active. "Everything will be alright. I'm from the government and I'm here to help."
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Flo Gimmie Some Lovin 44,987 posts Likes: 16 Joined Jul 2007 Location: Nanaimo,B.C. More info | Oct 06, 2009 23:07 | #8 gibbit1 wrote in post #8775029 It must be the compression, because my TIFF version at full size shows the eyes are sharp. I can even see the sky reflected sharply in them. I appreciate everyone's comments. She is a pretty dog, isn't she. Her fur is luxuriously soft. She's 11 years old now, but still very active. As for the toy, well, she's never without one. I wished the green side of the toy was up, as that would have made a better image I think. But you take what you get when they give it to you with dogs. Then the compression is bad... you're a great friend, but if Zombies chase us, I am tripping you.
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Oct 07, 2009 06:46 | #9 I agree, compression sucks. A shame that it's necessary. "Everything will be alright. I'm from the government and I'm here to help."
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Flo Gimmie Some Lovin 44,987 posts Likes: 16 Joined Jul 2007 Location: Nanaimo,B.C. More info | Guess its just the reach of her neck.no biggie.I tend to flip things to make eye contact better for myself. you're a great friend, but if Zombies chase us, I am tripping you.
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