My very first Model shoot

Here are a couple of shots from my first shoot with a real model let me know what you think.

The Night shot were shot at ISO 3200

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good shots

ok so photobucket seems to have meesed up my pictures on the upload. In pictures 3,4,and 5 the huge circle outside the lens flare is not there in the real ones. And it seems to have flattened all of the pictures, weird.

Photobucket tends to do that. No matter how small you make the file they still compress it and usually ruin it. There are other threads on here showing what they do vs Flickr and others. Nice shots though! Part of me likes the lens flare and part of me doesn't. Just cant decide.....

yeah i know what you mean about the lens flare i like it in some of the pics and in some i don't I will probably remove it in some of them.

The dark, indistinct background in #2 works. Combined with her pose, it creates a thoughtful, moody feeling.

Shot #2 works nicely.

#2 has a dreamy feel.

#4 is spot on. You blended the light together quite nicely as well as having everything else in the image look good.