Strobist Shoot - My g35 Coupe, CC Please

This is my first attempt in taking pics of my car w/ OCF. Are they too bright? Any CC would be great appreciated, thanks.

The last one is my favorite I like the angle.

The car looks great! The parking pass is a bit distracting.

Nice job not having any distracting reflections on the paint for the close ups. Two thumbs up for me!

I wish the pole didn't climb out of the rear of this car and I am even more relieved I don't have your payments every month!! I think you need a better backdrop.

Don't like the location, but lighting seems great. Especially on the first one.

Also, loose that front license plate....

Thanks for the CC. I'll definitely look for a better location next shoot.

Your lighting is spot on in my opinion. Composition wise, number 3 is best for me. 1, 2 and 4 seem just a wee bit too tight in the frame for comfort. Cracking shots though! Nice to see the setup shot too. What power were your flashes at?

Have you seen the guy who lights cars with multiple flash pops and a long exposure in complete darkness? http://strobist.blogsp​ot.com …sh-mode-to-automagic.html