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Oct 15, 2009 19:07 |  #1

Just plain and simple comment needed. Do you like it or not?

How do I get it better? Sorry, I couldn`t find the original file. This was saved as small Jpeg.

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I added the straight version just for comparison.

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Sorry still a small jpeg format...


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Oct 15, 2009 19:13 |  #2

Not sure if I like the tilted horizon much. The design elements are there, and I think you could get an interesting shot without having to resort to crazy angles.

Exposure looks good, but the photo quality isn't very good. It looks like too much compression.

Anyways, keep trying. Maybe try this one at a different time of the day, early evening would probably be best.




  
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Oct 15, 2009 19:21 |  #3

The Santiago Calatrava, I would also liked a straight horizon looking straight down the middle with the rest of the building. Good color and exposure.




  
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Oct 15, 2009 19:26 |  #4

Thanks for the feedback . Appreciated ;-)a


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Oct 15, 2009 20:31 |  #5
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Simply Amazing. I think you should contact the Louvre about this one.

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Oct 15, 2009 20:36 |  #6

LOL, odin, you're such a prick.. I love it. 8-)




  
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Oct 15, 2009 20:36 |  #7

it just doesn't do anything for me...

I know, right? I'm just sayin'...

  
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Oct 15, 2009 20:38 |  #8

OdiN1701 wrote in post #8830640 (external link)
Simply Amazing. I think you should contact the Louvre about this one.

LOL!


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Oct 15, 2009 21:18 |  #9
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Todd Lambert wrote in post #8830676 (external link)
LOL, odin, you're such a prick.. I love it. 8-)

Well he doesn't seem to want the constructive criticism so what the heck.

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Oct 15, 2009 21:54 |  #10

Pretty neat shot, I like the lines, maybe crop the boat out while still tilting?

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Oct 15, 2009 22:11 |  #11

What boat?




  
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Oct 15, 2009 22:18 |  #12

Chet wrote in post #8831252 (external link)
What boat?

I think he meant the base of the structure.


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Oct 15, 2009 22:19 |  #13

Like the Lido deck?




  
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Oct 15, 2009 23:18 |  #14

I feel like I'm seasick, LOL. :) I do like this picture, especially all the straight lines, but I agree that the horizon being crooked doesn't look good.




  
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Oct 15, 2009 23:26 as a reply to  @ Matthew Kieren's post |  #15

Not....but al least you didn't glamour glow it;)

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