Thanks Kevin, great crit and really helpful. I was really hoping my daughter (second from right, second row) wasn't going to be doing the mud bath but I'm sure you can imagine how well that turned out for me. I guess they deserved at least that after their season. I didn't mention it in this thread but this is our middle school team and our town isn't really that big (15k). Our HS team is much bigger but even in our MS meets, its not uncommon for the field to hit 300-400 girls. We are lucky though b/c we have an amazing coach and the team shows it. The MS girls had 5 of the top 10 spots in almost every meet this season. I'm just glad to see how much its helped my daughter in so many ways, she's pretty bummed the season is done.
I completely agree on the fill flash too. Truth be told, I had rain gear on the camera since the meet started in the rain and I don't have a flash cover so I shot ambient. Naturally, we got a little sun part way through. I have some room to work on #5 so I'll try a different crop there.
Thanks again man, always appreciate the feedback!