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Oct 21, 2009 22:14 |  #1

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Oct 22, 2009 08:47 |  #2

I really like the composition. The colors are beautiful. It makes me want to grab a good book and sit under the tree and read.


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Oct 22, 2009 08:57 |  #3
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another really nice image AWG, nice placement of tree trunks on the canvas. I think if you measured the distances trunk to trunk and trunk to edge you would find the golden mean ratio.




  
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Oct 22, 2009 16:18 |  #4

I'm not really sure of the intent.


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Oct 22, 2009 16:47 |  #5

HeleneD wrote in post #8871976 (external link)
I really like the composition. The colors are beautiful. It makes me want to grab a good book and sit under the tree and read.

With an apple in hand too. (OP: nice shot.)


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Oct 22, 2009 17:04 |  #6

Love the colors and the composition... but i feel like something is missing.... so i got to agree with drumsfield.

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Oct 22, 2009 17:14 |  #7

drumsfield wrote in post #8874784 (external link)
I'm not really sure of the intent.

shoot first, ask questions later.


I agree with the Golden Means comment. Measuring between the trunks is almost analogous to reconstructing space depicted in a Piero della Francesca painting - most famously "Flagellation of the Christ"

I also agree with ADAPTE - it does need something to draw the viewer into the 'space' as described above.

Good to see that you are evolving - but don't stop, you've got much to cover still.

One more thing - how come all your scenery shots are devoid of people or life forms higher than vegetation? It's Wisconsin and there may be more cows than people, but nary a bird in sight.

Do you smell bad or are you incredibly ugly that animal scurry away in fear? :p



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Oct 22, 2009 18:51 |  #8

drumsfield wrote in post #8874784 (external link)
I'm not really sure of the intent.

Autumn is colorful but this is the time most people start to feel empty
within- worst in Winter....Did you feel it ? I played around with the tree
spacing and left that hole in there...(If you noticed, there are 3 trees from a distance that are empty too. No leaves at all). As I said before, I like paintings...

It just happened that it`s sunset and now I`m a believer of timing in photography. That leaves glow beautifully without any post processing....



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Oct 22, 2009 19:14 |  #9

Mu Eugene wrote in post #8875080 (external link)
shoot first, ask questions later.

One more thing - how come all your scenery shots are devoid of people or life forms higher than vegetation? It's Wisconsin and there may be more cows than people, but nary a bird in sight.

Do you smell bad or are you incredibly ugly that animal scurry away in fear? :p

Have you heard about BIGFOOT? - w/ EOS :lol:



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Oct 22, 2009 19:55 |  #10

Excellent shot. Good focus. Must have used a smaller aperture like f8 or f16? I can see the farther sky and bushes in focus.


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I like it in B/W too ... sepia toned, cropped it a bit tighter. I am a texture junkie and I think image has some nice textures. Had to sharpen the image to make the shapes snap. I am wondering why the sky on the left is whiter than on the right.


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Oct 22, 2009 23:09 as a reply to  @ jetcode's post |  #12

Looks much better in color IMO...try turning down the saturation just a touch...the orange in the trees looks slightly blown out. Or just run a wide burning brush over the entire tree to tone down the exposure just a hair.


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Jeffro250 wrote in post #8877126 (external link)
Looks much better in color IMO...try turning down the saturation just a touch...the orange in the trees looks slightly blown out. Or just run a wide burning brush over the entire tree to tone down the exposure just a hair.

I should have said I like it in B/W too ... the color is definitely nice.




  
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Oct 22, 2009 23:33 |  #14

jetcode wrote in post #8877094 (external link)
I like it in B/W ... sepia toned, cropped it a bit tighter. I am a texture junkie and I think image has some nice textures. Had to sharpen the image to make the shapes snap. I am wondering why the sky on the left is whiter than on the right.

I was using a circ. polarizer. This pic came directly from Raw and no cropping or PP done. Except saving it to Jpeg...



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Oct 22, 2009 23:37 |  #15

jetcode wrote in post #8877253 (external link)
I should have said I like it in B/W too ... the color is definitely nice.

You can definitely see the hot spot on the leaves on B&W. That`s the harsh reflection of sunset hitting the surface.



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