Any thoughts for improvement?
Bob
bianson Member 83 posts Likes: 2 Joined Mar 2007 Location: Victoria, Canada More info | Oct 22, 2009 10:24 | #1 |
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joedlh Cream of the Crop 5,512 posts Gallery: 52 photos Likes: 684 Joined Dec 2007 Location: Long Island, NY, N. America, Sol III, Orion Spur, Milky Way, Local Group, Virgo Cluster, Laniakea. More info | Nice setting. I think I'd like a tighter crop. The foreground water doesn't contribute to the image in my opinion. There's also some stuff on the left and right that are sort of neutral. Lastly, you're not using the full tonal range. How's this? I cropped and adjusted levels. Joe
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jetcode Cream of the Crop 6,235 posts Likes: 1 Joined Jul 2009 Location: West Marin More info | Oct 22, 2009 12:44 | #5 PermanentlyI am nearly blind but everything appears to be a little soft. Was the wind blowing? Have you tried sharpening this image?
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drumsfield Goldmember 1,601 posts Likes: 27 Joined Oct 2009 Location: Bethesda Md More info | Oct 22, 2009 14:07 | #6 joedlh wrote in post #8872863 Nice setting. I think I'd like a tighter crop. The foreground water doesn't contribute to the image in my opinion. There's also some stuff on the left and right that are sort of neutral. Lastly, you're not using the full tonal range. How's this? I cropped and adjusted levels. I think the cropping the left kills the line that curves toward the back the picture. And cropping the bottom kills the equality between the top half and the bottom half. I think the picture looks terrific the way it is. That's just my personal opinion. It could be a little sharper as someone mentioned. Canon 5D MkIII | Olympus OM-D | Olympus E-P2 | 16-35L MKII | 24-70L MKII | 70-200L MKII | 85L MKII | EF 50mm 1.4 | EF 100mm 2.8 | 100-400mm L MKII | 20mm 1.7
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