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Oct 22, 2009 10:24 |  #1

Any thoughts for improvement?

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Oct 22, 2009 10:27 |  #2

Missed the attachment...sorry.


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Oct 22, 2009 10:50 |  #3

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Oct 22, 2009 11:23 as a reply to  @ bianson's post |  #4

Nice setting. I think I'd like a tighter crop. The foreground water doesn't contribute to the image in my opinion. There's also some stuff on the left and right that are sort of neutral. Lastly, you're not using the full tonal range. How's this? I cropped and adjusted levels.


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Oct 22, 2009 12:44 |  #5
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I am nearly blind but everything appears to be a little soft. Was the wind blowing? Have you tried sharpening this image?

I wish there was a more interesting atmospheric (sky) but that is the way it is. I love the color, the reflection, and the composition is nice. I agree with Joe that some crop work may improve this image.




  
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Oct 22, 2009 14:07 |  #6

joedlh wrote in post #8872863 (external link)
Nice setting. I think I'd like a tighter crop. The foreground water doesn't contribute to the image in my opinion. There's also some stuff on the left and right that are sort of neutral. Lastly, you're not using the full tonal range. How's this? I cropped and adjusted levels.

I think the cropping the left kills the line that curves toward the back the picture. And cropping the bottom kills the equality between the top half and the bottom half. I think the picture looks terrific the way it is. That's just my personal opinion. It could be a little sharper as someone mentioned.


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