First Attempt at Model Shooting. CC Please!!

I like the eye in #4, but the subject is lost on such a tight crop.

rim like on #2 looks interesting but both #2 and #3 are way overblown (at least on my work computer) to a point when a lot of the detail is lost.

#1 is better in the saturation and color. it does seem like her face is too warm but the background is too cold ( I think it's just the shadow)

overall, great first attempt and keep taking more pictures

Thanks in #2 and #3, I was going for that overblown look, but on my samsungs and laptops, the detail is there still... Can you double check on your editing computer?

Yeah #4, here mouth was in great shape and didn't like it so it went....

#1 I thik I messed up.... chin should be down more.....

#1 should have some fill flash to overcome the shadow on her face.
#2 and #3 are overexposed.
#4 doesn't do much for me.
IMO.#2 would have been a great pose and shot, if not for the overexposure and bright sunlight killing it, but I`m certainly no authority or expert.