Recent Shoot

Just finished a shoot on sunday and looking for some critigue. Thx for looking
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Shot and composition wise, not too bad, just too much vignetting going on. Its a little distracting and boring when its in every shot.

But you have to get the bangs out of her eyes. I think she has great eyes and a great smile... work with that... Most of the pictures she doesn't look intense, at least that is the feeling I think you wanted to capture.... it more looks like she is smirking or just not wanting to be there in her expressions....

Yea i know exactly what you mean. This is our 1st session so she was nervous. Where doing another shoot this weekend, i ask her to lose those bangs since there blocking her eyes. Sl omy biggest thing was composition i use to always center things.

I think #2's processing is great, I'd love to see more work on her left hand so it wasn't hot as it's losing a lot of detail.