My first Senior - cc welcome!

Did my first senior session last weekend, had fun, seniors are way different from toddlers that's for sure! Sorry if there is a lot, we did some at a park and some at a downtown area.

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Nice of your model to show up in WHITE to make matters more difficult. If you look at #1, her white top is perfectly exposed. Not so much in the others. Also, on my monitor her skin is way yellow ... almost a green tint in #2. Could be your intented processing, but colors aren't jibing with my monitor!

Good poses. Good BG scenery. #3 is the winner, but appears, (again, unless intentional on your part) to be blown out a bit.

dave

I like these. The skin is a bit yellow, and maybe a little too warm. You should probably check you monitor if you find the colors accurate the way they are now.

The whites doesnt bother. Looks fresh and works with the other pp-work.

Love it

I like 3 and 4 the best out of the set. The last one looks like she was uncomfortable or something.

agree with ^^. I don't thin the last work for me. She is uncomfortable looking and pose does not flatter her IMO. But very nice work other wise......ohh....and maybe one last nit pick.....her hand looks awkward as it clenches the bench....could be me though!

3 and 4 are definitely the best imo and I think with the fall colors you would do better to have a dark solid top with sleeves

thanks everyone, my husband reset my monitor and lost my calibration the night before I edited these, and I don't have the calibration software either (borrowed from a friend) so yeah that is on my list of things to buy asap.

Yeah and to say I was surprised about her wardrobe choice would be an understatement. Plus I told them to feel free to bring a couple outfits and they choose not to bummer.

4 is the best image; It would have been a killer shot if that leaf wasn't so close to her eye. The colors do appear off as already noted. I also think many of the other shots don't work well because her body is positioned straight to the camera. If you add more angles to the body, it should come out more pleasing. If you position her body 45 degrees off, she'll also loose a few pounds.

I really like 4 and 6. For is really nicely focused and composed. The colors are really nice too. I like the negative space in 6 and the color of the background.

some very good shots there, 1 & 4 are my favorites

3 and 4 are my favorite.

rsagusti wrote in post #8946063
thanks everyone, my husband reset my monitor and lost my calibration the night before I edited these, and I don't have the calibration software either (borrowed from a friend) so yeah that is on my list of things to buy asap.

Yeah and to say I was surprised about her wardrobe choice would be an understatement. Plus I told them to feel free to bring a couple outfits and they choose not to bummer.

What a bummer! I would have been speechless.