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Nov 08, 2009 00:59 |  #1

My style, Artsy - "TRINTY-BALANCE"


3 structures (TRINITY) balance the canvas despite of the chaotic & confusing World below it....(ABSTRACT)



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Nov 08, 2009 01:14 |  #2

On top of the PP, which I'm a little confused as to what it is suppose to do in terms of enhancing the picture...the picture is very busy. You have a building and cars int he background, trees. You've lost most of your detail in your main subjects (I can't really tell what they are).




  
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Nov 08, 2009 01:25 |  #3

lawlz_xD wrote in post #8975668 (external link)
On top of the PP, which I'm a little confused as to what it is suppose to do in terms of enhancing the picture...the picture is very busy. You have a building and cars int he background, trees. You've lost most of your detail in your main subjects (I can't really tell what they are).

It`s just a silhouette of an architectural design (3 FAN). You are right, it`s chaotic and confusing, but I called it "Balance" bec. the 3 Fan balance the whole canvas...a bit ABSTRACT...



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Nov 08, 2009 02:49 |  #4

My main critique is that balancing three congruent equally spaced objects in a central composition is like shooting fish in a barrel. I really like your idea and thinks it's worthy of pursuing more--maybe a series even--but I would like for you to look for more complex compositions that will make balance much more challenging to shoot and consequently more satisfying to look at.



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Nov 08, 2009 09:50 |  #5

Thanks for the feed back. I really would like to get a shot in an angle (one in front of the other) diagonally on the canvas, but there were no lights available. The only light I can find is barely the sunset and this is the only vantage point that gave me contrast. I guess timing is the key...



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