Here are a couple of shots of a model, Ann.
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eleganteye Member  154 posts Likes: 211 Joined Nov 2009 Location: USA More info | Nov 08, 2009 13:28 | #1 Here are a couple of shots of a model, Ann. HOSTED PHOTO please log in to view hosted photos in full size. Cheers, A. K.
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kauffmanv36 Senior Member 778 posts Joined Jun 2008 More info | Nov 08, 2009 13:29 | #2 shouldnt this be in the g&N forum, 2nd pic could certainly get me in trouble if i was at work. Bodies: 1DIII, RZ ProII, Walker Titan 4x5
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JmPhotography Senior Member  625 posts Joined Feb 2009 Location: STL MIssouri Area More info | Nov 08, 2009 13:31 | #3 too soft and the second pose is weird http://jmphotography09.deviantart.com/
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VanklePhoto Senior Member  549 posts Likes: 8 Joined Jun 2009 Location: Edmonton, AB, Canada More info | Nov 08, 2009 13:55 | #4 I think these are really close to great shots but IMO (and this is only IMO) the use of a too-wide angle lens in combination with a too close and high angle has created a bobble head effect especially in #1. I'd zoom out a little and back off and I think you'd have far superior results. But I love the colour and I love how the model is having a good time and is engaged in the shoot. Don't do what I do or you will pay the price I pay....
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mxracer535 Goldmember  1,140 posts Likes: 7 Joined Mar 2009 Location: Denver, CO More info | Nov 08, 2009 14:03 | #5 I have to agree about the wide-angle thing...youve created to much distortion and it makes her look funny. NADA...sold off my gear and bought a motorcycle. I might be back shooting someday...
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brennasg "Late to the party!"  1,246 posts Joined Apr 2009 More info | Nov 08, 2009 14:33 | #6 I also agree with the wide angle...and the angle in general on 1. I think 1 is a really weird pose.. Also on 2, either clone out the bra, or go bra less or strapless. 2 also needs more light on the eyes. She is a fun pretty model though. Franklin Tn Baby Photographer
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zoom_zoom Senior Member 903 posts Likes: 67 Joined Dec 2008 Location: AB, Canada More info | Nov 08, 2009 15:52 | #7 #1 would be better if you're further away from the model. Head and body dimensions don't work for the photo.
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Nov 08, 2009 16:55 | #8 kauffman v36 wrote in post #8977852  shouldnt this be in the g&N forum, 2nd pic could certainly get me in trouble if i was at work. I've removed the photo with the mini skirt since it was suggested that it may be NSFW. Cheers, A. K.
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Nov 08, 2009 16:55 | #9 VanklePhoto wrote in post #8977956 I think these are really close to great shots but IMO (and this is only IMO) the use of a too-wide angle lens in combination with a too close and high angle has created a bobble head effect especially in #1. I'd zoom out a little and back off and I think you'd have far superior results. But I love the colour and I love how the model is having a good time and is engaged in the shoot. Thanks I agree. And when i get a bigger studio or shorter model i will. This model is 6' and my studio is small... Cheers, A. K.
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