Desiree

I am still very new to lighting and would love some CC. This was all done with a signle light with a shoot through umbrella.

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1: attention on the cut of her hands at try to reduce the impact of the background (to lower the light on postwork)
2: strong, and same consideration for the background as i said above
3: i am not crazy about this type of pose
4: nice and i think could even improve with a more natural pose of the legs of the model
5: nice but attention on the right arm overexposed
6: nice even if with a better expression i think could improve and with less cut on the bottom and more cut on the top
7: attention isn't at level and it's present an evident distorsion on the wall
when there are architecture there are often a lot of problem, and even using postwork and tool for correct the perspective don't always is simply adjust the problem.

good set. I am also not a fan of the pose in #3

alessandro2009 wrote in post #8991632
1: attention on the cut of her hands at try to reduce the impact of the background (to lower the light on postwork)
2: strong, and same consideration for the background as i said above
3: i am not crazy about this type of pose
4: nice and i think could even improve with a more natural pose of the legs of the model
5: nice but attention on the right arm overexposed
6: nice even if with a better expression i think could improve and with less cut on the bottom and more cut on the top
7: attention isn't at level and it's present an evident distorsion on the wall
when there are architecture there are often a lot of problem, and even using postwork and tool for correct the perspective don't always is simply adjust the problem.

Thank you very much for the detailed response. I am very new to this and really appreciate your input. Luckily the model had done shoots in the past otherwise I would have been clueless when it comes to posing. There is a ton of stuff to pay attention to and its very easy to make a mistake. I am using flashes and using a flashlight for auto-focus as well as the modeling lamp so it is sometimes tricky to see the whole frame which produces cut off limbs/etc..

Thanks again!

perfeng702 wrote in post #8991711
good set. I am also not a fan of the pose in #3

Thank you for the coment!

Nice work the first photo really caught me right away.

love #2 but seeing the end of the bulb kind of ruins it. Crop the ends off the top and this would be stunning !

2 is the best in my eyes. very good looking girl, and nice work.

first and last ones are great!