Family portrait

A good friend asked me to take his family photo.
What do you think?

Nice photo. Do you have enough experience with PS to cover up the daughters tan line? I think she would appreciate it if you could. Plus it might be easy to to drop in a new background since its a solid color. Not that you have to or anything. Is this a cropped down photo? Just wondering if you have all the guys arm in an original?

Good job!

Nice photo but hte guy seems a bit out on his own, being taller and further away from the three lovely females. Do you have them in any other pose? Other than that I think it is good and I am sure they will be delighted with it anyway.

Thanks for your suggestions...and you are jus being too kind.
It was an impromptu picture (we were just returning from the girl's grad. ceremony).
He wanted me to take it right there, but the conditions were as "on purpose" to fool the camera's sensors:
The white blouse, the background wall is almost the same color as the mom's skin, etc..

With some preparation it would've been 100 % better...sometimes you take what's there !!

See this other one:

Well for impromptu shots, they're great and the second one is really nice.