Marilyn

The mom of the family group.

How do you like the pic ?

bien hecho freddycr. esta muy guapa! pienso que los ojo en el foto son OOF. usaste USM? Pienso que este va a ayudarte. Creo que es posible a selectar solomente el area de los ojo para este acion. Es posible que es el comprecion del software. LOL

Gracias para leyiendo mi espanol.

I like the picture because she is so beautiful, but your picture doesn't do her juctice at all. sorry.

A hotter backlight would give separation from the background.
The bg is pretty flat.

If you shoot a longer lens, move subject away from background, and experiment with distance from camera to subject, you can create some nice soft backgrounds.

well if we are giving suggestions to make the photo better, have her turn her head so she isn't sqaure with the camera, add light (or use a reflector of some sort) to your side to remove the horrible shadows on her eye sockets.

She may want to grow eyebrows instead of paint them on. They look very unnatural.

Yep. . . me too!