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Nov 23, 2009 20:05 |  #1

took this shot while in Monterey a couple weeks ago. when i looked at it, it turned out more like a snapshot. so i thought i'd get creative and see what happened. i'm sure this will be too dark for some and too overprocessed by others, but all C&C is welcomed!

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Nov 23, 2009 21:07 |  #2

It has some merit as an image. Poor centering of the birds, over processing, distracting elements, etc. are the standard replies people (experts) will often write. Technically is it a very good image? I’d have to say no but the “rules" and "accepted standards" are so easily broken today; if you like it, or someone else likes it, it's a successful image. Have fun with photography, keep shooting, keep learning, and keep experimenting.




  
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Nov 23, 2009 21:21 |  #3

Thanks Jeff!


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Nov 23, 2009 22:47 |  #4

I'd crop down so the seagulls were in the top third of the image. The rest of it sort of works for me because you kept detail in the building & one seagull.


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Nov 23, 2009 23:45 |  #5

here is a cropped version of the original

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Nov 24, 2009 00:07 as a reply to  @ WaFp's post |  #6

That's funny. I would actually crop it the other way and keep the upper portion of the building and birds; with more of the 'halo' in the image. I don't know if it's technically correct, but it's a fun image to me; I rather enjoy it.


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