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Nov 23, 2009 21:11 |  #1

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Nov 23, 2009 21:33 |  #2

Wow...no kidding on the "new" PP lol. Crazy sh1t!


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Nov 23, 2009 22:11 |  #3

It's interesting and it's gritty, but there is too much empty space.

Aside from the unique processing, the composition needs some help - such as a figure sitting on a park bench with back to the camera.


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Nov 23, 2009 23:37 |  #4

Robert_Lay wrote in post #9070907 (external link)
It's interesting and it's gritty, but there is too much empty space.

Aside from the unique processing, the composition needs some help - such as a figure sitting on a park bench with back to the camera.

Agree.


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Nov 23, 2009 23:39 |  #5

If I woke up and saw this outside, I think I'd go back to bed for a couple thousand years till the fallout settled...

Yikes!


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Nov 23, 2009 23:40 |  #6

FlyingPhotog wrote in post #9071301 (external link)
If I woke up and saw this outside, I think I'd go back to bed for a couple thousand years till the fallout settled...

Yikes!

Me too..:shock:

AW..I like you try stuff......


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Nov 24, 2009 06:19 |  #7

Sir Robert, I agree and thanks for the feedback. The picture and pp is my attemp to feel what Mother nature feels about "pollution". This aint some over the rainbow dream...



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it's a toxic industrial look which I would mentally catalog as a print option. A tighter crop of the bottom is possible.




  
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Nov 24, 2009 18:41 |  #9

jetcode wrote in post #9072505 (external link)
it's a toxic industrial look which I would mentally catalog as a print option. A tighter crop of the bottom is possible.

Should I change the title to "Soot" ?

What do you think? ;)



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AWGD8 wrote in post #9076112 (external link)
Should I change the title to "Soot" ?

What do you think? ;)

The tree looks wild. You can call it anything you like and it just about looks like LA in 1980. I would wash my truck one day and it would be covered with soot the next. We used to drive up the mountain in Alhambra and look down on the smog it was so thick.




  
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