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Nov 28, 2009 17:30 |  #1

My photo shoot with Anthony was late in the afternoon, later then I hoped for after being rescheduled once already. The sunset light was a little harsh for my liking by I think I made it work. Besides the customer is 'very happy with the outcome' and that's all that matters.
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Nov 28, 2009 19:12 |  #2

while I will agree that the if the customer likes them than all is well....I'll comment on a couple:
I like #3...but would crop in some of that sky and get rid of that shiny object.
4-5 are not bad but a bit too bright on the skin for me.
2 is just too warm for me
Overall not to bad and a valiant effort.


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Nov 28, 2009 19:54 as a reply to  @ 1downfall's post |  #3

I appreciate that you were staying away from keeping the subject centered in #4 and #5, but instead of thee Rule of Thirds, you ended up closer to the Rule of 4-1/2.

That's as visually unsettling as centering the subject. Just crop those in a bit so the eyes are on the 1/3 line.

Just some C&C on some very nice photos.




  
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Nov 28, 2009 20:40 |  #4

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while I will agree that the if the customer likes them than all is well....I'll comment on a couple:
I like #3...but would crop in some of that sky and get rid of that shiny object.
4-5 are not bad but a bit too bright on the skin for me.
2 is just too warm for me
Overall not to bad and a valiant effort.

Thanks. The shiny object is the moon, and that's why there is so much sky in that shot.



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