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Nov 29, 2009 18:47 |  #1

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Nov 29, 2009 18:49 |  #2

No pictures.


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Nov 29, 2009 18:55 |  #3

hawkeye60 wrote in post #9104021 (external link)
No pictures.

Sorry its there now


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Nov 29, 2009 19:04 |  #4

I think it's a great picture and your PP is awesome, although having everything in focus makes it a bit more of a snap shot. Know what I mean?


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Nov 29, 2009 19:18 |  #5

I agree, awesome PP, but maybe try a wider aperture, to knock the cars/signs in the background out of focus, so that nothing is competing with your subject.


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Nov 29, 2009 19:38 |  #6

AmandaMarie wrote in post #9104096 (external link)
I think it's a great picture and your PP is awesome, although having everything in focus makes it a bit more of a snap shot. Know what I mean?

Yeah you are right . i should have opened the lens more to have some nice background blur


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Nov 29, 2009 19:39 |  #7

lindsaytblum wrote in post #9104176 (external link)
I agree, awesome PP, but maybe try a wider aperture, to knock the cars/signs in the background out of focus, so that nothing is competing with your subject.

Thanks. I will try the same shot next weekend with a lower F and hopefully will get some better results.


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Nov 29, 2009 19:59 |  #8

I'm not sure...I kind of like everything in focus on that shot. My thinking was maybe a crop with a little less sky. I'll wait for the second one but I really like that one.


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Nov 29, 2009 21:17 |  #9

On second look, I think it was oversharpened. The child's feet look almost unreal against the grass.


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