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Nov 30, 2009 14:40 |  #1

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Some shots I took in London yesterday. Such a bad day, it didn't stop raining...

I've posted these shots in the HDR section too but I felt that they might be well suited here also.

C&C much appreciated!



  
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Cyclop
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Nov 30, 2009 15:30 |  #2

Nice series.


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Dec 01, 2009 13:55 |  #3

Thank you. :)

Could I get some constructive C&C if possible? I'd really like to hear what people think about the photographs or about the PP.




  
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Dec 01, 2009 14:16 |  #4

The first one in your series seems way too flat. I know you said it was grey and rainy, but that image just does nothing for me. I understand what I'm looking at, the pipes on the back of that building, but the whole seem is too flat. And the sky has nothing going on other than grey ick. Maybe darken the sky to make it look more ominous. The sky needs something more, darkening would be my first instict.

The "poundbuster" building is really your weakest shot. The building is cool, but I dislike the angle you took on it. Maybe that was your only angle. The cropping seems a bit tight too. What is PoundBuster anyway? Does it have meaning to that building? Again a very flat image with no pop.

I like the tectures in the railway scene, the tracks leads the eye around the corner, but I don't like that the edge of the tracks are missing. The bridge from no where is nice too. Could you increase saturation on that blue to give the scene one pop of color and then darken the sky. This image might be a good candidate for that fake model T/S technique!


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