Almost magizine worthy....Almost.

Well, i took these on Wednesday. the story goes like this:
school was a half day because of finals, so i got home around 12pm. i was extremely bored, so i thought i would bust my camera out of retirement of being unused for a couple of months. well, the day didnt go so well, so my pictures match my mood. i cant fake a smile anyways, i tired, and it looked BAD.
C&C is welcome...actually, i encourage it. i need to get better, so dont hold back, and bash away.
without futher adue, my pictures.

Seems to me like you needed to bring your flash a little more to the front of you, it seems to be almost parallel to you. Also come off the wall a little farther, you look a little too close to it. Not bad shots, the crops are pretty good. I think if you would have left just a tad more of your head on top in the 3rd one that it would be a really good shot.

thanks. i really appreciate the advice. i would've been off father on the wall, but i only had my cheap tripod with me, and it only holds my camera landscape, and the room is kinda small. i'll keep that and the flash thing in mind next time. i'll probably do this shoot again tomorrow morning. i'll post up the new pictures here too.