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Dec 24, 2009 10:40 |  #1

Hi, I'm new into the slr world and in general in making photos. I'm using Canon 450D with kit lens 18-55 IS and after reading this forum two months I decided to sign up and this is my first thread. Please critique my photos and tips would be appreciated.
Btw..Hello everybody!!!


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Dec 24, 2009 11:40 |  #2

I like how you play around with composition, dof and pp. You're definitely on the right track.
They're all ok photos, we all started out taking photos like these. #5 and #7 have potential of becoming something awesome with a tad bit more pp, the rest i couldn't really care for.

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Dec 24, 2009 11:53 |  #3

robertn wrote in post #9257404 (external link)
I like how you play around with composition, dof and pp. You're definitely on the right track.
They're all ok photos, we all started out taking photos like these. #5 and #7 have potential of becoming something awesome with a tad bit more pp, the rest i couldn't really care for.

Keep it up!

Wow..thank you very much for your comment..it's first professional comment about photos i made..thanks again!A part of slight cropping I used pp just with 2nd photo (still don't know nothing about pp). Anyway i'm very happy you like something from my photos..i wait for more comments pls :)


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Dec 24, 2009 13:21 |  #4

Nice images. For me there is too much empty space above the heads. "Rule of thirds"
I love the shot on the beach. Great composition and Focus and lighting.
Keep up the great woek.


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Dec 24, 2009 14:14 as a reply to  @ BigStig's post |  #5

I really like the B&W ones good job.

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Dec 24, 2009 14:55 as a reply to  @ Amarinelli's post |  #6

Thanks a lot for your tips guys..i really have now bigger motivation and will experiment more and more trying to learn how to make good images :) Tomorrow i'll try to post something new.....

marry christmas everyone


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Dec 24, 2009 16:16 |  #7

i really like five and seven also


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Dec 24, 2009 16:26 as a reply to  @ zwright's post |  #8

In terms of conveying a message, number 5 does a nice job. I can really get a sense of context.


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Dec 24, 2009 16:41 |  #9

zwright wrote in post #9258564 (external link)
i really like five and seven also

of image #5 i'm kind of proud as it was very spontaneous because my fiancé was simply trying to find right street ;) I have one question. Does every image need pp? How it works nowadays?


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Dec 25, 2009 01:08 |  #10

You're doing just fine Jazzy. These are much better than most first attempts.

I also like #5. It just needs to be straightened out.
Your fiancee has a real natural look that is hard to come by. Shoot more of her.
The others with the plants and statue don't do much for me.


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Dec 25, 2009 01:23 as a reply to  @ Grimlock's post |  #11

You have a beautiful subject there to work with, now just get her in a bikini and hone your skills ;)



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Dec 25, 2009 02:48 |  #12

lol .. whoa.


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Dec 25, 2009 05:34 as a reply to  @ Grimlock's post |  #13

For what regards bikini pictures let's say i'll keep them for myself ;)
I present some other pictures..and have to say again that i'm very thankful for your opinions!!!


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Dec 25, 2009 05:43 |  #14

jazzyjazz wrote in post #9258678 (external link)
I have one question. Does every image need pp? How it works nowadays?

Well, no but yes.
With the right pp you can make a photo pop so much more and your style of pp is what will make you stand out from other (eventually) photographers. Good pp can make a good photo amazing.

Btw, I really like #3 (could use minor tweaking) and #7, awesome job!


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Dec 25, 2009 09:27 |  #15

robertn wrote in post #9260783 (external link)
Well, no but yes.
With the right pp you can make a photo pop so much more and your style of pp is what will make you stand out from other (eventually) photographers. Good pp can make a good photo amazing.

Btw, I really like #3 (could use minor tweaking) and #7, awesome job!

So true...here are is an image with and w/o PP done in aperture.


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