First post of young rookie..please critique :)

levinader wrote in post #9276038
I agree, there is too much sky. Still, I wouldn't crop it that tight but give her a bit of breathing space. Also, by doing so the Rule of Thirds starts to work and in this case I think that would make a better photograph. I also removed some of the sepia. Personal likes and dislikes of course... Here's my edit:

A good lesson for the OP. I see it as a strong vertical portrait. To me the eyes fit the rules of thirds. To levinader the line of the body fits the rule of thirds. Two shooters editing makes for two different view--even when we agree on the basics.

advaitin wrote in post #9276102
A good lesson for the OP. I see it as a strong vertical portrait. To me the eyes fit the rules of thirds. To levinader the line of the body fits the rule of thirds. Two shooters editing makes for two different view--even when we agree on the basics.

I agree, and already have changed image more close to the leviander version...a part of cropping is there something else i can do to pop out this image?

Hi again,

How about this one? Corrected contrast,temp and saturation, cropped what unnecessary.

As always I ask about C&C..

1/50, f/4, 18mm, 200iso

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