snow and mist

the original was nearly b+w anyway,does this work?

Not working for me. I'd like to see a little more detail to make it interesting.

I have to concur with Yusef. The image has little interest to me. With the exception of the faint vertical line in the center, the whole thing looks tilted, which I almost always find unnerving. A horizontal composition might work better, but I don't see what you can do with that black wall escaping off the edge.

Its alwite...

First, I'd lop off all that dead sky. Bigger issuse though is overall lack of contrast and strong subject in the image. The rock wall has lost all detail. The snow has no detail. Tire tracks are go from faint to almost non existent. All three of these lead the eye to such an obscure horizon that we can't figure out what we're looking at or why the horizon is so tilted.

If this were shot in raw, I'd play with levels and curves adjustments to tease out the lost detail. There might be something in here with a bit of work.

thanks for the comments

had a go at the suggestions.........ap​art from the tilt which i can not help as its a hill!

That looks better. More interest/detail to look at in the picture. Looks cold where you are at. Glad I live in So Cal, oops it is raining today!

Second one is definitely better than the first, still not a lot going on though.