Nates98cbr wrote in post #9295824
Very nice, the rest of the set in your blog are great. They all have a nice warm feeling to them. The dad looks like he's a war hero! All those medals.
Thank you - He is very close to retirement, and has seen a lot over the years.
sctbiggs wrote in post #9296462looks like you missed the focus on the ring shot... number 6 i think.... i dunno, they aren't numbered
and the one after it, maybe a little too warm. Looks like she has horrible rub on tan.
Last one is great. Maybe rotate it slightly clockwise to straigten her up. nice job on the rest.
The ring shot looks good to me as far as I can tell. I zoomed in to 100% on the original and it looks fine.
The fireplace shot was intentionally left "extra-warm" for the feeling of it. They love it, as do I. I know we all have different taste, but this wedding is a winter wedding, so a nice warm setting fits well IMO.
Again, as for the straightening, I shot angled purposefully. I do appreciate your feedback though - other points of view are good to hear.
A_Gurl wrote in post #9296463Love the colors of #4...
On the fireplace one you might want to work on the little shadow on her right breast above her dress because when I first saw it I thought she was exposed lol I may be the only one that notices that but better tone safe than sorry lol
Now that you mentioned that, I will clean that up. The way the light is coming in over her textured dress does give the look of exposure in that area. I will correct that.
