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Jan 07, 2010 11:18 |  #1

IMAGE: http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/007/8/3/Golden_by_JackMcEntire.png

I'd really like to hear people's thoughts on the composition, the lighting, and the PP.

Thanks in advance for any C&C! :)



  
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Jan 07, 2010 11:20 |  #2

i don't like the combination, i would just have it as one eye. Really nicely taken though. I prefer the bottom one...




  
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Jan 07, 2010 11:28 |  #3

Thank you. :) The reason I decided to make them one image was because they're my parents' eyes, and they wanted to compare them! :p I can see exactly where you're coming from, I guess they're really all about the individual.




  
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Jan 07, 2010 11:29 as a reply to  @ Jack McEntire's post |  #4

MAcro eyes creep me out, lol, but super great clarity and focus!

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Jan 07, 2010 12:00 |  #5

Lol, thanks! :lol: I just got my Sigma 150mm last week and I'm very pleased with it!

This is the before and after, I forgot to post it before:

IMAGE: http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/007/a/c/Golden___Before_and_After_by_JackMcEntire.gif



  
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Jan 07, 2010 12:21 as a reply to  @ Jack McEntire's post |  #6

ACH:shock::shock:

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Jan 07, 2010 12:39 |  #7

Jack McEntire wrote in post #9344279 (external link)
Thank you. :) The reason I decided to make them one image was because they're my parents' eyes, and they wanted to compare them! :p I can see exactly where you're coming from, I guess they're really all about the individual.

those are from 2 different people? seriously?




  
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Jan 07, 2010 13:36 |  #8

They are indeed. :) You'd be surprised how similar eyes look at 1:1!




  
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Jan 08, 2010 00:02 |  #9

I think less vignetting would help, or at least feather it back towards the edges more. incredible sharpness...

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Jan 08, 2010 00:18 as a reply to  @ pickupman92's post |  #10

I have wanted to do this for awhile. Looks great.

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Jan 08, 2010 06:15 |  #11

Cracking detail!

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Jan 08, 2010 06:50 as a reply to  @ JimMcrae's post |  #12

Scary:P

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Jan 08, 2010 10:53 |  #13

blech, too much skin detail. sharp tho

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Jan 08, 2010 14:50 as a reply to  @ vpnd's post |  #14

good old ros and brian

good picture jackMcEntire x:)




  
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Jan 13, 2010 15:17 |  #15

Thank you! :)

As I've mentioned in a couple of other threads, the sharpness of the Sigma 150mm is great, I'm really pleased with it! AF may hunt a little in low light but it's dead silent nonetheless. :p




  
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