A few pics for you to critique

What a difference in photos.lol.innocence and not so...

THe first I like the angle, but not the white balance.Very red.Give it a correction?

Second is too dark for me, and the thing that caught my attention right off the back was " Pull those jeans up Mister"!

Third, I guess the bling is the focus? Are the tats in color?

Fourth, just a non complimentary perspective, up the nose..crop is awkward for me.The bright picture/poster thing is harsh....

I agree with flo on the first two.
The third just doesn't look right to me. Maybe if you caught part of his neck or something it would help. His hands seem to come out from nowhere. Maybe if he wasn't holding them at all and they were just laying against his shirt??
The forth I agree with flo also. The "up the nose" shot is a bit distracting as is the light over his sholder. I know you want to see the art on his neck but I think that if the camera was up just a little higher and the head was down just a bit, you would still be able to see the tattoo's, it wouldn't be quite so up the nose and you would still obtain the shadow over the eyes.

Thank you both for your honest feedback. Appreciate it.

The shot of the baby seems to have a small amount of motion blur or camera shake, especially in the hand. I also agree that the white balance is off. To avoid the shake/blur I would suggest a higher ISO and faster shutter speed.

The shot of the baby is very cute. White balance need to be corrected though. As stated above im not really feeling #3 either. The hands really look out of place (kinda looks like hes getting his chain stolen).