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jelaineab

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Jan 14, 2010 20:43 | #1

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I'd love feedback! Thanks everyone.
If you have flickr I have more there.

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vk2gwk

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Jan 15, 2010 00:14 | #2

The first three do not do much for me. The bark is not really properly focussed and makes me guess what it is (I saw you named it Bark on Flickr )
The b/w door and curtain is spoiled by the shadow on the wall. and the third one is nice but does not tell much.

#4 is very nice with it's play of light and shadow and the different colours. Pretty!

Try to get some separation between posten pictures (CR between the img url's)..... that makes it easier to "separate" them.

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Vidcanon

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Jan 15, 2010 07:52 | #3

I like the last shot the best . And number 2 without the shadow. Keep on shooting.

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D1337

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Jan 15, 2010 11:12 | #4

You definitely have the eye for something that looks good photographically. The last two work for me much more than the first two.
The light in 3 is superb.

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