Fall outdoor weddinng shots for c&c

Hi I wanted to post a couple of wedding shots from this past fall for some c&c, It was a beautiful September day and these are a couple of my favorites, Let me know what you think.Thank you
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Alan

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The first one needed more fill for the face. The second one is better but I dont like the hardness of the vignetting. It should of gradually blended more. But this is just my opinion and I went to Michigan Schools so that doen't mean much lol.

^^^^^^ I agree with the above but really like the processing on 2.

I agree, number one needs additional light. The bottom left part of her dress is pretty hot but the rest of her is underexposed. Also, your colors are abnormal, almost neon.. Dial back that saturation a bit. #2 .. I like the idea.. Though I am not sure if it's the processing or what it is, but she looks like her eyes are completely white? The way she is looking up like that looks weird. Also, you do have a gazebo pole coming straight of of her head.. I don't personally care for the processing.. too green.

When saw the first image I thought nice. When I saw the second, I thought wow. I like her pose. She looks extremely relaxed enjoying a beautiful moment on her special day. I love the processing, Lucky bride.

light in the first... and what's with the toxic flowers?

the second one... eeeh.. i like the processing if there was no human element in the picture. however, there is a bride and it makes her skin look bad.