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Jan 24, 2010 18:42 |  #1

Just after a little bit for C&C on this, so if you could be as so kind it would be greatly appreciated.

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shot was taken on my new 50D using studio flash in a small bedroom

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Jan 24, 2010 19:15 |  #2

I think it is well lit... looks nicely composed, but I am not expert on this type of shot.


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Jan 24, 2010 19:48 |  #3

i like the shoes there and the color, but her head looks a little strange on the color. I would advise remove all color but red (esp around her hair and skin) or cut her feet away from that background all together so it's not so distracting.


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Jan 24, 2010 20:28 |  #4

SJPHoto wrote in post #9463221 (external link)
I would advise remove all color but red (esp around her hair and skin)

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Jan 25, 2010 17:54 |  #5

Thanks folks, will have another go at an edit later and try your ideas out.

Deeslk, what do you mean this type of shot?


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Jan 25, 2010 18:36 |  #6

chris250 wrote in post #9469756 (external link)
Thanks folks, will have another go at an edit later and try your ideas out.

Deeslk, what do you mean this type of shot?


Boudoir perhaps?


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Jan 25, 2010 20:53 |  #7

I personally would use a shallower depth of field. While the shoes look tack sharp, the rest of the background is also to much in focus and it keeps drawing my attention.


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