Just after a little bit for C&C on this, so if you could be as so kind it would be greatly appreciated.
shot was taken on my new 50D using studio flash in a small bedroom
Thanks for looking
chris250 Member 198 posts Joined Oct 2007 Location: Ayrshire, Scotland More info | Jan 24, 2010 18:42 | #1 Just after a little bit for C&C on this, so if you could be as so kind it would be greatly appreciated. shot was taken on my new 50D using studio flash in a small bedroom Thanks for looking
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deeslk Senior Member 566 posts Likes: 2 Joined Oct 2008 Location: Markham, Ontario, Canada More info | Jan 24, 2010 19:15 | #2 I think it is well lit... looks nicely composed, but I am not expert on this type of shot. Canon 5D MKII Gripped, Canon 7D, Gripped, Canon 50D, Gripped, 70-200 MK II 2.8L IS USM, 24-105 4L IS USM, 70-200 4L IS USM, 17-40 4L USM, 17-55 2.8 IS USM, 50 1.8 II, 3 x 580 EXII, Tokina 11-16 2.8 AT-X 116 PRO DX......
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SJPHoto Senior Member 487 posts Joined May 2007 Location: Huntington Beach, CA More info | Jan 24, 2010 19:48 | #3 i like the shoes there and the color, but her head looks a little strange on the color. I would advise remove all color but red (esp around her hair and skin) or cut her feet away from that background all together so it's not so distracting. SJP WEBSITE
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fweasel Member 97 posts Joined Jan 2010 Location: Chicago, IL More info | Jan 24, 2010 20:28 | #4 SJPHoto wrote in post #9463221 I would advise remove all color but red (esp around her hair and skin) 2nd Canon 7D, 430EXII, Tamron 17-50mm f/2.8, Sigma 30mm f/1.4, Canon 50mm f/1.8, Tamron 18-270mm F/3.5-6.3 Di II VC PZD
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Jan 25, 2010 17:54 | #5 Thanks folks, will have another go at an edit later and try your ideas out.
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SJPHoto Senior Member 487 posts Joined May 2007 Location: Huntington Beach, CA More info | Jan 25, 2010 18:36 | #6 chris250 wrote in post #9469756 Thanks folks, will have another go at an edit later and try your ideas out. Deeslk, what do you mean this type of shot?
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frameworks Senior Member 608 posts Joined Oct 2009 Location: Omaha, NE More info | Jan 25, 2010 20:53 | #7 I personally would use a shallower depth of field. While the shoes look tack sharp, the rest of the background is also to much in focus and it keeps drawing my attention. Dave | 50D Gripped | 17-40L f/4 | 70-200L f/2.8
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