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Jan 25, 2010 20:27 |  #1

IMAGE: http://i148.photobucket.com/albums/s1/EdV_02/1001_PeaceValleyLakeGalena_007-Edit.jpg

Image was made Saturday morning at Lake Galena in Peace Valley Park (Bucks County, PA) in the minutes before sunrise. The lake obviously was frozen.

Used my Canon 50D; 24-70 2.8L w/ a 3-stop graduated neutral density filter; all tripod mounted.

When I got home and looked at the images on the big screen, I felt they were cold, desolate, lonely and boring. I wanted the image to be cold, desolate, lonely and less boring. So I went to work. I started with cropping out some of the excess ice in the foreground in order to provide a better balance. Then I ran the image through Nik Dfine to remove any noise that may have presented itself. Moving on to Viveza 2.0, I opened up the blacks in the trees on the left and right and reduced brightness while adding saturation to the ice and sky accentuating the blues and reds. I also reduced structure a bit in order to start smoothing the ice blemishes. After contenting myself that I did what I wanted to do in Viveza, I moved on to Color Efex Pro. I said that I had used a 3-stop GND while shooting but felt it could use a bit more so I used the Graduated ND filter in Nik and finished it off by softening and smoothing the image using a filter designed, I think, for portraits called Glamour Glow. Finally I used Sharpener Pro to reduce the structure and focus a bit more in order to reduce the impact of the ice blemishes even more – much like a portrait photographer would do to remove skin blemishes.

“Fire and Ice” is the result… cold, desolate, lonely.

Your thoughts? C&C is welcomed and appreciated!

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Jan 25, 2010 20:47 |  #2

I like the contrast in colors, but I think you might have gone a bit too far with the smoothing. I think the areas that bug me would be the trees as I'd like to see a bit more detail instead of it being so "glow-y". I know the dark area up top is just the dark sky but it looks like a vignette almost, not sure if I like that.

It's a nice shot overall, just picking it apart a tad.




  
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Jan 26, 2010 06:10 as a reply to  @ dank ink's post |  #3

Appreciate you taking the time to respond, dank. There are reasons for the trees being the way they are. If I kept them in focus then they would become the focal point where the eye rests. This image is not about the trees. It is about the fire in the sky and the ice on the lake. The trees just guide the eye from one to the other with diverting attention.

At least that's the theory! :)


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Jan 26, 2010 13:11 |  #4

Heh fair enough. Cool shot though.




  
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Jan 27, 2010 05:59 as a reply to  @ dank ink's post |  #5

Thanks Dank.

Wonder what others think? Over 200 views and you're the only one to say anything! :rolleyes:


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Jan 27, 2010 06:13 as a reply to  @ EdV's post |  #6

Overall a nice image but it has too much foreground space for me.Also i think the horizon is slightly off.


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Jan 27, 2010 08:28 |  #7

It is a nice image, but for me, it looks "too" processed. But that is just my $0.02! :D


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Jan 27, 2010 15:45 |  #8

Personally, I love the photo. I can see this as one of those motivational images with a phrase placed over the lower portion on the ice. Very calming & beatiful. Just my opinion.


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