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Jan 27, 2010 13:11 |  #1

This is from September. Going back and working on a few from 2009 wedding archives. C&C appreciated.

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Jan 27, 2010 13:16 |  #2

Nice shot but crop or clone out the wall thats creeping into the left hand side of the shot as its quite distracting.


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Jan 27, 2010 16:16 |  #3

Nice moment, but it seems a little out of focus to me. could be compression


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Jan 27, 2010 17:33 |  #4

The colours (or lack thereof) make the shot look a little lifeless. As mentioned, it's also kind soft, but the fence looks a little more in focus. Also, shoot her at an angle instead of her torso facing you head on. She looks like she's in great shape, but no matter the body, an angle is almost always more flattering.


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Jan 28, 2010 09:35 as a reply to  @ picturecrazy's post |  #5

I thought it looked a little soft, but it was hard for me to tell. I did a little more work in Lightroom w/ sharpness/clarity masking... any better?

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