C&C Welcome since I am still learning...
taknbyd Member  192 posts Likes: 1 Joined Sep 2008 More info | Jan 29, 2010 21:34 | #1 C&C Welcome since I am still learning... Canon 40D/ EF 70-200mm IS 2.8L/ EF 50mm 1.4/ EF 28-135mm/ 430ex II x2/ 580 exII and Light Modifiers
LOG IN TO REPLY |
lundgrenj Senior Member 363 posts Joined Jun 2009 Location: Utah More info | Jan 29, 2010 22:06 | #2 Watch the focus, make sure its on the eyes. She's got things growing out of her head, should be easy to post process those out. Great photo otherwise. Canon 7D, 6D
LOG IN TO REPLY |
iOctopus Member  58 posts Joined Jul 2009 More info | Jan 29, 2010 22:08 | #3 I think focusing is a little off. maybe a teenie weenie bit over exposed? otherwise good shot - and a very pretty model.
LOG IN TO REPLY |
Slaterza Goldmember 2,007 posts Likes: 7 Joined Nov 2007 Location: Beijing, China More info | Jan 30, 2010 00:58 | #4 I would try either a reflector or off camera flash to help with this one. It looks a bit underexposed but the background is totally overexposed. Keep working on it this is the start of a great shot try it again to see if you can get a little more light on her face. Sam Laterza flickr
LOG IN TO REPLY |
locky Goldmember  2,663 posts Likes: 1 Joined Sep 2006 Location: Montague, Michigan More info | Jan 30, 2010 04:49 | #5  Permanent banI like this alot. The little underexposure doesn't hurt this. You can easily bump this up in pp if you wish. I would probably clone out the couple of items that are looking like they are coming out of her head. If you turn on image editing I would show you my take on it. Post more of her. You should be very proud I just got my first pair of glasses that I didn't think I needed. I apologize to anybody in the past year that I said their pictures were out of focus lol.
LOG IN TO REPLY |
anthonyi Goldmember  1,362 posts Likes: 1 Joined Jan 2008 Location: UK More info | Jan 30, 2010 11:15 | #6 locky wrote in post #9503045  I like this alot. The little underexposure doesn't hurt this. You can easily bump this up in pp if you wish. I would probably clone out the couple of items that are looking like they are coming out of her head. If you turn on image editing I would show you my take on it. Post more of her. You should be very proud  I agree with locky; potentially a very nice shot.
LOG IN TO REPLY |
frameworks Senior Member  608 posts Joined Oct 2009 Location: Omaha, NE More info | Jan 30, 2010 11:48 | #7 Agree with the others.... remove the two things coming out of the back of her head and focus on the eyes.... make them the tack sharp part of the image. Good work Dave | 50D Gripped | 17-40L f/4 | 70-200L f/2.8
LOG IN TO REPLY |
fbartek Member 55 posts Joined Jan 2010 More info | Jan 30, 2010 11:51 | #8 i'm not shure if the vignette works for me. www.bartekfraczyk.wordpress.com
LOG IN TO REPLY |
lambbottomphotos Member 74 posts Joined Jan 2010 Location: Texas More info | Jan 30, 2010 14:36 | #9 I love this picture. You're a beginner and thats a great shot. I do think the depth of field could have been a little thinner....
LOG IN TO REPLY |
1downfall Goldmember  4,059 posts Likes: 5 Joined Nov 2007 Location: virginia beach, va More info | Jan 30, 2010 18:01 | #10 locky wrote in post #9503045 I like this alot. The little underexposure doesn't hurt this. You can easily bump this up in pp if you wish. I would probably clone out the couple of items that are looking like they are coming out of her head. If you turn on image editing I would show you my take on it. Post more of her. You should be very proud Good stuff here and agree! love those eyes! Bill
LOG IN TO REPLY |
Gr8outdrsmn Senior Member  918 posts Likes: 3 Joined Sep 2006 Location: South East US More info | Jan 30, 2010 18:28 | #11 Great shot, but like they said, watch the eyes. "A good photograph is knowing where to stand." -Ansel Adams
LOG IN TO REPLY |
bholtz Goldmember 1,099 posts Joined Feb 2009 Location: Oshkosh, Wisconsin More info | Jan 30, 2010 22:08 | #12 good shot and i agree with the rest 5D II// 7D w Grip// 6D/ nifty 50// 100 Macro//Sigma 70-200 //Tamron 28-75//Tamron 17-35//
LOG IN TO REPLY |
JelleVerherstraeten Goldmember  2,440 posts Likes: 1 Joined Dec 2008 Location: Antwerp, Belgium More info | Jan 31, 2010 07:55 | #13 |
[godfather] Goldmember 1,736 posts Joined Dec 2007 More info | Jan 31, 2010 09:08 | #14 Permanent banAWesome Shot! IS it me or its a bit reddish? Elinchrom Studio Equipment Sale
LOG IN TO REPLY |
Jan 31, 2010 09:30 | #15 Thank you everyone for your feedback. I went ahead and removed the things growing out her head. I didn't notice my image editing was turned off. Thank you all for your comments!  Canon 40D/ EF 70-200mm IS 2.8L/ EF 50mm 1.4/ EF 28-135mm/ 430ex II x2/ 580 exII and Light Modifiers
LOG IN TO REPLY |
 | x 1600 |
| y 1600 |
| Log in Not a member yet?
Register to forums
Registered members may log in to forums and access all the features: full search, image upload, follow forums, own gear list and ratings, likes, more forums, private messaging, thread follow, notifications, own gallery, all settings, view hosted photos, own reviews, see more and do more... and all is free. Don't be a stranger - register now and start posting!
|
| ||
| Latest registered member is MWCarlsson 611 guests, 125 members online Simultaneous users record so far is 15,144, that happened on Nov 22, 2018 | |||
