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Feb 02, 2010 19:18 |  #1

http://vimeo.com/91308​57 (external link)

please critique. thank you


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Feb 05, 2010 18:39 |  #2

what that bad


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Feb 05, 2010 19:29 |  #3

It's not really still photography, and most people on here are probably more into still photography than videography.


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Feb 06, 2010 11:20 |  #4

Post some stills here in the thread if you want feedback. Linking to a video on another Web site is not going to yield any decent feedback...particularl​y with no word of explanation from you.


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Feb 06, 2010 14:18 |  #5

the zooms are *really* harsh, the pan/scan is a bit unprofessional and the sound editing needs a lot of cleaning up.

once the funds are there, a steadycam setup and one of the various setups for smoothing zoom and focus will be a great investment. right now this looks and feels too "home movie".

the cost of entry for decent slr-based videography is still pretty high and the ease of use of normal HD video cameras makes it a tough choice to make.

cliff's notes: today's critique has been brought to you by the word "smooth"


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Feb 07, 2010 17:38 |  #6

thanks for the critique. So. Less zooming and panning and or smother of both.

Ya the end got pretty ruff. For some reason the secondary sound tracks "turn on" while exporting. Buggy software I guess.


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Feb 08, 2010 13:23 |  #7

This is a photography forum!???


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