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Feb 07, 2010 09:26 |  #1

Shot with 5D and Sigma 15mm f/2.8 DG fisheye, not sure about SS/Aperture/ISO, light was ambient only.

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Feb 07, 2010 09:43 |  #2

a little fill flash on the flowers. Pretty cool shot though.


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Feb 07, 2010 12:04 |  #3

I have this strange impression that everything is folding in on the woman and she's frozen in terror watching it happen ...


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Feb 07, 2010 12:24 |  #4

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I have this strange impression that everything is folding in on the woman and she's frozen in terror watching it happen ...

or preying that a journeyman electrician hung the chandelier.


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Feb 07, 2010 12:25 |  #5

That's praying you fool.


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Feb 07, 2010 12:34 as a reply to  @ sue.t's post |  #6

Impressive. Unique. Artistic. I Like the comp and the perspective. Many lines and forms.
Can't very well comment on the exposure 'cause I'm on a laptop. Tilt the screan 1/4 inch forward or back and the exposure's appearance is likely to change.

If there isn't enough detail in the shadows beneath the flowers for your taste, PhotoShop can remedy.

Have you tried different crops? I'd like to see the ceiling cropped off from above the flowers (just for comparison)


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Feb 07, 2010 12:36 |  #7

It gives me the imression like shes tripping on shrooms. Cool shot!


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Feb 07, 2010 13:36 |  #8

Yes very kool shot..... i like it , but if i may ask could form have made the Sky on the top not so bright, to me it's a bit distracting to what is a great pic.... and if form could of how would this be done ?




  
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