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Feb 09, 2010 21:24 |  #1

Looking for criticism! Composition/lighting/ etc thanks

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Feb 10, 2010 01:02 |  #2

with the hair I'd maybe redden up the lips a little. I like the less saturated effect, but I'm curious as to what increased over normal saturation would look like as well.

I like #1 the best. sorry I can't give more criticism...


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Feb 10, 2010 01:07 |  #3

Looks like a slight yellow cast from my monitor. Some of the highlights in her hair have a yellow tint from my monitor. Looks like a fun shoot, I like #1 & #3 best. Thanks for sharing.


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Feb 10, 2010 04:38 |  #4

There is something not quite right with the white balance here..... I think - if you shot RAW - a little bit of experimenting with the sliders could get that right.
Other than that... very nice shots. Only #3... I would like that one better with her eyes open.


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Feb 10, 2010 07:15 |  #5

I like them, except the last one her eye lash is coming off. After looking at them again, there is some thing going on with the lashes on all of them.


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Feb 16, 2010 15:54 |  #6

thanks guys.. i was trying to go for a little more vintage yellowish effect on the photo.. but i will correct them and repost




  
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Feb 16, 2010 22:52 |  #7

kiddsoles wrote in post #9622092 (external link)
thanks guys.. i was trying to go for a little more vintage yellowish effect on the photo.. but i will correct them and repost

I got what you were trying to do here as far as color cast I personally liked it. I think it works well.


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