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Feb 13, 2010 22:55 |  #1

not sure if this is the right forum, but ill post here as the photo seems to suit the forum name.

anything i can improve on?

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Feb 14, 2010 00:56 |  #2

I like the way smoke trails naturally - I'm not sure the mirroring improved anything at all.


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Feb 14, 2010 01:09 |  #3

heres the original and original inverted.

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Feb 14, 2010 06:46 |  #4

You could make this so much more better in terms of the mirrored image. As you may already have noticed you have a human like figure in there (reminds me of the horror film 'mimic') By eliminating the background as pure white or pure black and then colouring the smoke in I think would make this a great image. Thats just my opinion, but great capture either way.


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Feb 14, 2010 16:56 |  #5

ha, i did this using a tshirt as a background, with a lamp setup to light the smoke lol

pretty ghetto, but turned out good for a first try


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