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Feb 15, 2010 23:10 |  #1

night 6 to 10... give me your best critique.

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Feb 15, 2010 23:55 |  #2

I vote for "Night 8". Nice series.


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Feb 16, 2010 00:33 |  #3

6 & 8 look pretty good. Is the dog shot processed? Almost looks too sharpened, or it might be me. Maybe a little hot on the white as well.

Keep on shooting, I enjoy your creativity.


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Feb 16, 2010 07:19 |  #4

I love night 6. very nicely done. Night 10 I also like. The others are a little indistinct, but those two really stand out.




  
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Feb 16, 2010 08:43 |  #5

I vote 6. Very nice shot! Keep em coming.


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Feb 16, 2010 12:32 |  #6

thanks. any more critiques? im waiting for some cold hard critiques!



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Feb 16, 2010 12:34 as a reply to  @ jxs1984's post |  #7

I like them all..the reds in 10 are sweet.


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Feb 16, 2010 12:55 |  #8

Love the colour in night 6... I also like them all, sorry for lack of harsh critique =P


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Feb 16, 2010 13:32 |  #9

Okay, "night 6" I think you have white dusts inside your camera. If so, please use Rocket blower (external link) to clean them out. And the rest of them turn out excellent! Best of luck...


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Feb 16, 2010 13:35 |  #10

^ignore this guy lol



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Feb 16, 2010 14:45 |  #11

lifejacket wrote in post #9621129 (external link)
Okay, "night 6" I think you have white dusts inside your camera. If so, please use Rocket blower (external link) to clean them out. And the rest of them turn out excellent! Best of luck...


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Feb 16, 2010 15:01 |  #12

Night 6 is really good. Beautiful colour!

The dog in Night 7 is captured really well, but I find the chair leg and blanket a little distracting.

Composition and colour in Night 8 is fantastic.

I'm not a fan of the selective colour in Night 9.

Again, nice use of colour in Night 10.


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Feb 16, 2010 15:51 |  #13

vaguelyobscured wrote in post #9621714 (external link)
Night 6 is really good. Beautiful colour!

The dog in Night 7 is captured really well, but I find the chair leg and blanket a little distracting.

Composition and colour in Night 8 is fantastic.

I'm not a fan of the selective colour in Night 9.

Again, nice use of colour in Night 10.

thanks! need more critics like you lol



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Feb 16, 2010 16:43 |  #14

Night 6... How long was the exposure?


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Feb 16, 2010 19:35 |  #15

FelixDeSouze wrote in post #9622360 (external link)
Night 6... How long was the exposure?

6 secs, more info here (external link)



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