I've been playing around with scene's lately heres my latest shot... 
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Tlee05 "Suck these toes" 1,134 posts Joined Oct 2005 Location: Surrey More info | Mar 02, 2010 20:29 | #1 I've been playing around with scene's lately heres my latest shot...
"The goal is not to change your subjects, but for the subject to change the photographer."
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catacon Senior Member 351 posts Likes: 4 Joined Mar 2008 Location: St. Louis, MO More info | Mar 02, 2010 20:58 | #2 Very interesting. I think the haze or fog masks the picnic scene too much. I like the composition and lighting, however. Overall a very nice shot. 5DmkII | Gripped 5DC | Canon 17-40mm f/4L | Σ 85 f/1.4 | Σ 50 f/1.4 | 430EX II
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apixelintime Goldmember 2,123 posts Likes: 1 Joined Dec 2008 Location: Dee Eff Dubb! (N. Texas) More info | Mar 03, 2010 10:46 | #3 +1 on the too much fog. It is obscuring the the scene a little too much. I do like the one lone empty shoe. Makes me, as a casual viewer, want to question where the owner is and the circumstances about the lack of people... Christopher Cross | Apixelintime.com | Nightographer.com (coming soon)
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AJ.eightFive Member 34 posts Joined Aug 2008 More info | Mar 04, 2010 21:18 | #4 Somebody, somewhere outside the frame on the right, is on fire I think. Gripped 50D, 30mm f/1.4 EX, 24-70mm f/2.8L, 430EXII
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Mar 05, 2010 18:07 | #5 Hey thanks for the feedback, since doing this I have added slightly more pop to the image as it seemed slightly flat. "The goal is not to change your subjects, but for the subject to change the photographer."
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PBeeee Senior Member 559 posts Likes: 2 Joined Nov 2007 Location: Montana USA More info | Mar 05, 2010 21:56 | #6 I like the smoke. But when I scroll that down on my laptop I like the whole thing even better with no sky showing. Just a thought. Great staging, I think I might stand the apple up. You have one too many things 'fallen' to the right. Maybe stand the shoe up too. I'm sure it has a great profile shape. Overall I like this quite a bit though.
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