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Mar 05, 2010 20:21 |  #1

so i recently started taking scenery pictures and im very very new to photography...i would love to have some suggestions/ comments on my work.

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Mar 05, 2010 20:45 |  #2

resized, i didnt realize how large it was...


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Mar 05, 2010 21:29 |  #3

I like the shot. Maybe a horizontal would have been better to accentuate the lines of the train and track.




  
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Mar 05, 2010 23:04 |  #4

Thanks, ill try a horizontal one tomorrow. I wanted to capture a bit of the bridge overhead so that's why I chose the vertical shot.

I see your point and I appreciate the suggestion.

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Mar 06, 2010 09:49 |  #5

no more?


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Mar 06, 2010 10:00 |  #6

kipofwoden wrote in post #9738039 (external link)
I like the shot. Maybe a horizontal would have been better to accentuate the lines of the train and track.

I'm on my phone so it's not the best to view images on but I would agree with the above statement. The bit of sun flare is bothering me too but again... I'm on my phone so it may just be how it's showing up my phone.


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Mar 06, 2010 11:15 |  #7

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I'm on my phone so it's not the best to view images on but I would agree with the above statement. The bit of sun flare is bothering me too but again... I'm on my phone so it may just be how it's showing up my phone.

thanks for the info, that sun glare bothers me too but it also adds something for me...maybe thats my newbie eye:lol:

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Mar 06, 2010 11:21 |  #8

More graf please I am a writer and always appreciate other pieces.

Nice shot, but I am a nooblslice also.


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Mar 06, 2010 12:14 as a reply to  @ JoeyBaccala's post |  #9

awesome man, i love the graf. my fiances sister is pretty damn good, ill see if i can get some pieces up today.

im heading out now, ill be looking for some:)


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Mar 09, 2010 00:18 |  #10

anything else?


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Mar 09, 2010 10:13 |  #11

i think taking it horizontally would have made more of an impact, but i like the graffiti and the train tracks. also, the colors look a bit washed out. i think it would stand out more if the colors were a little deeper/richer.


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Mar 10, 2010 01:55 |  #12

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i think taking it horizontally would have made more of an impact, but i like the graffiti and the train tracks. also, the colors look a bit washed out. i think it would stand out more if the colors were a little deeper/richer.

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